Sunday, 26 June 2016

Research into Another Student's Work

Elinor Kirk

Research

  • Strengths 
    • She has attempted to use different formats in her work
    • She includes lots of pictures and fully explains them
    • Her analysis is very detailed

  • Weaknesses
    • She lacks formats, it is mainly text with some photos


Planning
  • Strengths
    • She has written many detailed posts and has often written posts with her inspirations on and has made mood-boards
    • She has used online programs such as polyvore or pintrest to create an ideal outfit for her music video 
  • Weaknesses
    • There are some posts that could be more detailed, like her storyboard. She could have explained some of the shots
Music Video
  • Strengths 
    • The shots are obviously well thought out and very well put together
    • The shots flowed together very well
  • Weaknesses
    • The lipsyncing seems slightly forced, not natural at all
Digipak
  • Strengths
    • The digipak is very representative of real Lorde CD covers.
  • Weaknesses
    • The editing doesn't quite fit, the girl has very obviously been placed on the black background.
Magazine Advertisement 
  • Strengths 
    • The sans serif white font works very well for this magazine advert, it looks very modern and fits very well
    • The advert looks quite realistic.
  • Weaknesses 
    • The editing, much like the digipak, looks like the girl has been placed on the background and it doesn't look natural
Evaluation
  • Strengths
    • Each evaluation is a different format making it much more interesting
    • All evaluations are in great depth, very well analysed.

From looking at this blog, it has helped me to see what I have to do to make sure my blog is done to a high level. I have learnt that I need to include lots of different formats to make my blog more interesting and I need to keep all my work to a high standard, like this blog has done.

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